Agent vs. Object Focus (From your teacher)
PROJECT FOCUS |
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In science, business, and other collaborative fields, writers place the project in the subject position and the workers in a by phrase or a list at the end of the writing. This effectively shifts the focus to the interesting, important content and avoids repetition of the agent(s).
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The human genome has been mapped by scientists.
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Three billion base-pairs of DNA were determined. (by scientists who are too many to list)
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This knowledge is expected to lead to better treatments for diseases like cancer and diabetes. (by an unknown future research team)
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The discovery must be linked to responsible use. (by everyone)
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AGENT FOCUS |
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Reporting information with active sentences is preferred whenever possible because the inclusion of the agent(s) is more personal; and the use of active verbs is more dynamic. However, sometimes there are too many agents to list and the collective work is the actual focus.
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Scientists have mapped the human genome.
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Scientists have determined three billion base-pairs of DNA
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Scientists expect this knowledge to lead to better treatments for diseases like cancer and diabetes.
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Everyone must link this discover to responsible use.
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